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I'm waitin
Image size
3008x2000px 1.19 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D40
Shutter Speed
10/12500 second
Aperture
F/3.5
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
May 3, 2009, 3:41:49 AM
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Hi Shana! Since I don't know you, I hope you don't mind that I'm critiquing your photograph.
First I'll start with the positive:
oThe bright yellow of the popsicle against the green grass is what caught my eye in the thumbnail and made me click on it.
oThis is a great idea for a concept- who doesn't love popsicles on a hot summer day.
oI also like the composition. The placement of the focal point to one side of the photo draws your eye in one place.
Something to work on:
oTry to make sure the focal point is actually in focus. If you aren't sure how sharp the focus is through your viewfinder, try taking a few extra shots to make sure one of them is nice and sharp.